Unfinished tag

Yes this is obviously unfinished, i know.
It's possibly going out to a friend when finished, but i could use some critique so i can edit it before finalization.

The render is going to need a lot of blending. If that bottom text is actually part of the tag, it might be better if you just didn't use it. For lighting, I would try and play to the lighting on the right side, and darken the lighting on the top left corner. And that'll play to a kind of neat concept.

Other than that, this looks like it'll turn out pretty sweet. Can't wait to see the final product.

Kite wrote:The render is going to need a lot of blending. If that bottom text is actually part of the tag, it might be better if you just didn't use it. For lighting, I would try and play to the lighting on the right side, and darken the lighting on the top left corner. And that'll play to a kind of neat concept.

Other than that, this looks like it'll turn out pretty sweet. Can't wait to see the final product.

Oh no the current text is just temporary.
Yea i had wanted it to be darker in the middle, but i could definitely see an improvement by following your advice.